BattleAxe First Read: Chapter Eleven: Unlocked Doors

[pangolin20]

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NRSG: A good day, everyone, and welcome back to BattleAxe! Last time, nothing of importance happened.

 

Chapter Eleven: Unlocked Doors

We open on everyone riding into Tare, “the small town which [sits] on the border of the Plains of Tare and the small Province of Tarantaise”. It is the 21^st of September. The land here is not well suited to agriculture, so it “relie[s] on the east-west trade across Achar for its primary income”. When Embeth first came here, she was overwhelmed by the space around the town, but now she loves it and “appreciate[s] the slow rhythms of Tarian life.” I am not sure what these thing have to do with each other, but whatever.

The townsfolk line the walls to see everyone arrive, “waving and cheering”. They are “not displeased” to see the soldiers, as they mean money. The greater part of the Axemen camps outside the town, as the town is too small to hold them all. Embeth does invite “the women, Gilbert, Axis and Belial” to her castle. Axis tells Timozel that he can come too. Timozel is glad with that, but he is “resentful that he need[s] Axis’ permission to sleep in his own house”, especially when Axis will probably use it to further his affair with Embeth.

Axis wants to stop for two days to “replenish supplies and rest his men and their horses”. There is a lot of things to be done after days of hard march, and the soldiers might soon be dead anyway, so he tells his commanders to “let as many men as possible enjoy their evenings in town.”

Cut to a description of Embeth’s castle. Yes, this chapter is very disjointed. The castle is secluded from the rest of the town, it stands on a hill, and it is very large. We are now informed that Embeth has another son and daughter, “twins and a year younger than Timozel”, who are both still at Carlon. Why we are told this now, I have no idea.

Embeth wants to talk to Faraday, but Merlion keeps her locked in her room, “going over designs for dresses, and describing the duties and responsibilities she would have to assume once she be[comes] the Duchess of Ichtar.” Faraday also wants to talk to Embeth, or go out into town. But Merlion has her remember the families of the nobles “out to the third cousin” instead, and “the type of property and income that each control[s]”. She also has to memorise “the towns and villages of Ichtar”, and the names of “Borneheld’s retainers and senior household staff”.

Hmmm, I can see why Merlion wants to do this, but I doubt that it will be very effective. There is only so much that Faraday can learn in two days, after all, and Merlion might better try doing this once they have some more time… I also love that we have a mention of the “important nobles”, but the only mention of Baron Greville, next to whose domain they are, is in the glossary of this book.

Well, by the night of 23 to 24 September, “Faraday [is] despairing”. They will leave the next morning at dawn, and she feels “exhausted rather than refreshed”. She sits up in her bed, looks out her window, and thinks about her marriage to Borneheld. Now that she is away from him, she can think a little more “dispassionately” about it.

She knows she was “bedazzled” by her first look at Axis, but she understands she cannot let that ruin her marriage with Borneheld. Axis certainly looks better than Axis, she says, and his reputation as BattleAxe gives him more glamour than Borneheld, but the latter is not a poor choice by any means. He is the richest man in the realm aside from Priam, and he is the WarLord and heir to the throne. “She could do no better”. I agree entirely with this, but I have the feeling Douglass does not expect us to.

She feels somewhat guilty over her behaviour when they left. Borneheld had not meant to insult her and tried to be kind, she says. She thinks that his “blunt nature” might be because of lack of a mother. We are told that Searlas never remarried after Rivkah “died”, and died when Borneheld was 14, which left him to control Ichtar from that age. And there could not be a regent why?

She thinks that maybe he just needs “the gentle hand of a wife”. She tries to picture him two years on: still a “fighting man”, but with “polished manners and easy conversation.” She thinks that maybe he just needs some manners in his life, and she will provide that. And this truly does not seem all that unrealistic to me, no matter what Douglass may say.

She wonders what it was like for Embeth when she married Ganelon. She knows that Embeth comes from “a Carlonite family” and that she married younger than with Faraday. “Perhaps she’d faced similar problems”. Faraday decides that she will speak to Embeth, and goes to her room. She slowly walks through the corridor outside her own room, holding her breath when she passes Merlion’s room. She curses Merlion’s lists, saying that, at least, she can recite Borneheld’s retainers to him on their wedding night. She wishes that Merlion would “tell her more about what a husband expect[s] of a wife.”

She pauses outside Embeth’s room, and she sees a little bit of light coming around the door. She taps the door a few times, and she hears Embeth’s voice softly, which she takes as an invitation to come in. She quickly enters and sees Embeth sitting on the edge of her bed, “swathed in a green woollen wrap, with a look of utter shock and disbelief on her face.” Faraday says that she is sorry to disturb Embeth, but she wanted to ask… And then she sees Axis standing naked by the fire. Oh my, they have been discovered!

Embeth rises and stretches her hand out toward Faraday. Faraday looks back to her, thinking what a fool she is. “Her eyes fill[] with mortified tears” and she whispers an apology. She flees before she begins to cry. Axis makes to go after her, but Embeth tells him to wait there, as she will talk to Faraday.

Cut to Embeth hurrying down the corridor. She hopes that Faraday will not slam her bedroom door or bolt it, lest Merlion should wake up. Thankfully, Faraday does neither, and Embeth can rush into the chamber, and close the door.

She finds Faraday in tears, “her shoulders convulsing with sobs”, and she embraces her. Faraday immediately apologises, which I can completely understand. Embeth says that it is all right, and Faraday did nothing wrong, and they were just foolish to try it here.

Faraday takes a deep breath, and tries to stop her tears. She thinks about “what a simpleton she [is]”, and then asks how long their affair has been. Embeth says it was “on and off for about three years”. She explains that Axis and her have been “good friends” for a long time (I somehow doubt that), and now and again they “are lovers”, but they are not “in love”. She asks if Faraday understands. Faraday says she does, but she “still feel[s] so stupid.”

Embeth says that at least she learned a quite important “rule[] of court etiquette”. That is, do not burst into bedrooms late at night, no matter if the person inside is supposed to be alone. Faraday smiles and says Merlion did not teach her that. Embeth lets her go and asks what Faraday wanted to see her about. Faraday first wants to ask a question about what just happened, and that is if “women at court take lovers, even though they are married to another”.

Embeth knows that she has to be careful, as this is indeed not uncommon, but she can “foresee disaster” if she tells Faraday this. So she says that noblewomen usually only take lovers once they are widowed. Faraday asks if Embeth and Axis were not lovers while Ganelon lived, and Embeth says not, and she truthfully says that if she should remarry, she will be true to her husband.

Faraday is silent for a moment, and then says she wanted to ask Embeth about marriage, and how she felt about it. Embeth notes she is having doubts, and Faraday nods. Embeth says that this is not uncommon, but she cannot pull out now, and only death can separate them.

Faraday sighs and asks: “But… but what if we are not happy together?” Embeth then says that duty always comes first, if love and happiness come, that is nice, and she should not let “any foolish, girlish, romantic notions” come between her and her duty. Hmmm, somehow I doubt that Douglass will meaningfully deconstruct this, instead of just having this as a background.

Faraday asks if she had happiness with Ganelon. Embeth says that he was a good man, who cared for her, and respected her. That is certainly good to hear. But one day, after she had her children with him, “[she] woke up and realised that [she] was in love with Ganelon”. Hmmmm. I see that Embeth thinks that happiness and “love” in a relationship are inherently tied to romantic love, which leads her to present the situation as worse than it actually is.

I mean, if Faraday genuinely likes Borneheld and is also happy with him, that might be a quite fulfilling relationship, even if she does not like him romantically. And, of course, even if she would like someone romantically (like Axis), that does not mean that she would be happy in such a relationship.

Because of this, I think that Embeth spent several years miserable because she was not romantically interested in Ganelon, even though she did like him. And I also predict that this might lead Faraday to choose Axis over Borneheld, because she likes Axis romantically, even though he has been nothing but awful to her.

This is a quite basic analysis to me, but I do not have the idea that Douglass ever thought of this while writing this book. I think the thoughts were more like “women suffer” and “Axis Good, Borneheld Bad”, respectively. And yes, I know this was the 1990’s, but given how little thought this book has had until now, I am not inclined to be forgiving.

Well, Embeth says that “[t]wo years later”, Ganelon was killed by a boar during a boar hunt. And where do those boars live, then, if all the forests are gone? Or have new forests been planted in the meantime? Douglass did not think the deforestation plotline through, did she?

Embeth does not add that she almost “died with grief” when her steward told about the death. For a moment “her heart clench[es]” as she remembers how the steward’s tunic was splattered with blood and he had tears in his eyes. Oh, that is very awful. I would complain about this muted reaction, but I presume it was some fifteen years ago, given that she specifically mentions it was after the birth of the children.

Faraday is comforted by all this, and says that “[t]his is what [will] happen between Borneheld and her”. She says that “love” might not come immediately, but it will come, and she will be a very good wife to Borneheld, like Embeth to Ganelon. “All it took was patience, respect, and a firm sense of duty.”

She thanks Embeth for the talk. Embeth tucks Faraday in, and tells her to sleep, as they need to leave soon. Cut to Embeth opening the door to her chamber, where Axis has already gone. She feels sad because she misses Ganelon. The chapter ends like this: “If Faraday had been betrothed to a Ganelon then Embeth would have no doubts about the outcome, but Borneheld was no Ganelon.” Ooooh, Borneheld is just so awful!

Well, this was a somewhat boring chapter. I did like the interaction between Embeth and Faraday, though it was marred a little by Douglass’s amatonormativity. My main problem is that this stands in the way of anything plot-connected happening. We have had to wait for 11 chapters already, and we are now almost a sixth in, and only next chapter will it pick up. It is not bad to have, but it would be nice if it would be later in the book.

Oh well, next chapter should prove to be better. Until then!

 

Comments

[epistler]

We are now informed that Embeth has another son and daughter, “twins and a year younger than Timozel”, who are both still at Carlon. Why we are told this now, I have no idea.

Me neither, because none of them will ever actually appear in the series.

I also love that we have a mention of the “important nobles”, but the only mention of Baron Greville, next to whose domain they are, is in the glossary of this book.

Him being the guy Axis gets to join his side by threatening to torture him to death in the next book, so you'd think he'd at least warrant a mention.

She wonders what it was like for Embeth when she married Ganelon. She knows that Embeth comes from “a Carlonite family” and that she married younger than with Faraday. “Perhaps she’d faced similar problems”. Faraday decides that she will speak to Embeth, and goes to her room.

This is probably the only time you ever see her exercise any common sense at all.

Douglass did not think the deforestation plotline through, did she?

Not in the slightest, no. For one thing cutting down all the forests should be causing massive erosion all over the countryside, but nope.

“If Faraday had been betrothed to a Ganelon then Embeth would have no doubts about the outcome, but Borneheld was no Ganelon.”

Because...? I mean from Axis and StarDrifter the author obviously knows how to write an irredeemably horrible person, so why didn't she bother to do so with Borneheld? I mean it's not exactly rocket science.

[pangolin20]

Me neither, because none of them will ever actually appear in the series.

NRSG: Then why even mention them... Douglass was not very good at information management, it seems.

Him being the guy Axis gets to join his side by threatening to torture him to death in the next book, so you'd think he'd at least warrant a mention.

Yes, I would think so, too. Also, I would not predict that at all from how this book has gone until now.

This is probably the only time you ever see her exercise any common sense at all.

Hmmm, in the second trilogy I think she is much better. I especially liked the "bringing Zenith back from the shadow-lands" plot.

Not in the slightest, no. For one thing cutting down all the forests should be causing massive erosion all over the countryside, but nope.

Never mind that that would help establish the Seneschal as properly evil...

Because...? I mean from Axis and StarDrifter the author obviously knows how to write an irredeemably horrible person, so why didn't she bother to do so with Borneheld? I mean it's not exactly rocket science.

Yes, even writing him as a horrible caricature would be more in line with what we are told.

[epistler]

NRSG: Then why even mention them... Douglass was not very good at information management, it seems.

Definitely not. (Faraday also has older sisters who will never be important and whose existence creates a pretty big plothole).

Douglass also has a really bad habit of having some new concept or creature appear right out of nowhere, and then establishing its existence in an after the fact infodump. Examples: the "gryphon" and the "Sacred Stag of the Forest" or whatever the hell it's called.

Hmmm, in the second trilogy I think she is much better. I especially liked the "bringing Zenith back from the shadow-lands" plot.

True; guess I was just thinking of this trilogy. Faraday is the only character who actually matures at all, sigh.

Never mind that that would help establish the Seneschal as properly evil...

Yeah like imagine if they pinned the environmental disasters their policies created on the Forbidden.

Yes, even writing him as a horrible caricature would be more in line with what we are told.

At least Gorge is shown hatching evil plots and also kidnaps a baby and commits implied rape. He's a pathetic cartoonish parody of Pure Evil, but you can't headcanon him as a misunderstood good guy the way you can with Borneheld.

[pangolin20]

Douglass also has a really bad habit of having some new concept or creature appear right out of nowhere, and then establishing its existence in an after the fact infodump. Examples: the "gryphon" and the "Sacred Stag of the Forest" or whatever the hell it's called.

I think that habit also extends to the later books, for example with the Lealfast, though I get the feeling it is slightly better there.

At least Gorge is shown hatching evil plots and also kidnaps a baby and commits implied rape. He's a pathetic cartoonish parody of Pure Evil, but you can't headcanon him as a misunderstood good guy the way you can with Borneheld.

Indeed. Though I would be interested to see what he would be like if he would not be constantly influenced by WolfStar... And he is also still more nuanced than the TimeKeepers.

[chessybell_90]

I'm not really liking the notion that Borneheld's rough manners 'must' be due to the lack of a female influance (I can change him Momma!), but I can certainly see him choosing to polish them up for his wife's sake.

Axis? You're supposed to hide when there's an unexpected knock on the door.

So I'm reading the bit where Embeth talks about marriage, and all I can think of is C. S. Lewis talking about how romantic love doesn't last and how many predictably unhappy marriages are love-matches. For my own part, I'm told womanizers make poor husbands and if nothing else Borneheld clearly wants to spend time with Faraday outside of the marriage bed. Have we seen any indication that Axis wants to spend time with Embeth that doesn't involve having sex?

Presumably wild boars have become a major agricultural pest.

Borneheld not being a Ganelon would mean more if we knew Ganelon.

[pangolin20]

I'm not really liking the notion that Borneheld's rough manners 'must' be due to the lack of a female influance (I can change him Momma!), but I can certainly see him choosing to polish them up for his wife's sake.

NRSG: Indeed. I also see that Axis, as he is written, would be the more conventional target for the "I can change him" attitude, so I get the feeling that Douglass has accidentally switched the tropes with regard to Borneheld and Axis.

Axis? You're supposed to hide when there's an unexpected knock on the door.

Yep.

For my own part, I'm told womanizers make poor husbands and if nothing else Borneheld clearly wants to spend time with Faraday outside of the marriage bed. Have we seen any indication that Axis wants to spend time with Embeth that doesn't involve having sex?

I do not think so. And yes, Borneheld would be the superior partner by far.

Presumably wild boars have become a major agricultural pest.

That would make sense, but I would have loved to hear more information about this.

Borneheld not being a Ganelon would mean more if we knew Ganelon.

Yep.

[littlecaity]

You know, I can't blame Timozel for being resentful that his mum and his boss are having an affair, especially when it's interfering with his ability to just spend a night at home in his own bed. I would bite someone if their sex life got in the way of a decent night's sleep!

The rest of it is a bit much, but making sure Faraday's at least vaguely prepared for her new responsibilities as the wife of a powerful nobleman seems like a pretty good idea to me! Yeah it's frustrating that she wants to talk to people and can't right now, but again, she's about to marry the heir to the damn throne, she needs to suck it up and study. And in this world, any woman born into nobility would know that.

See, Faraday, now you're thinking a bit more like someone in your position should. And I like that she has realised that Bourneheld was trying! Such a pity the potential for a good marriage and even the chance of helping feuding brothers find peace is going to get completely skipped over for 'passionate' (hah) 'romance' (HAH!).

Awwwww, Embeth keeps being so lovely and human. I really do like her! ...Which makes me worry, because in series like this, characters who I like tend to either be suddenly villains or murdered to give the lead angst.

I like that Embeth says love might not necessarily come straight away, but it can. Honestly I think I would've preferred if it was more 'I didn't love him romantically, but I cared for him regardless and his death hurt me more than I can say'. I mean don't get me wrong, arranged marriages leading slowly into genuine romantic love are great, but every now and then I'd like to see ones that don't end in romantic love but are happy and strong regardless. And it would be a little more realistic for Faraday's expectations. At least she's being kind.

I have the feeling there's not going to be much kindness in these books and I should cling onto every good moment while I can.

[pangolin20]

You know, I can't blame Timozel for being resentful that his mum and his boss are having an affair, especially when it's interfering with his ability to just spend a night at home in his own bed. I would bite someone if their sex life got in the way of a decent night's sleep!

NRSG: Yes! It might be the first time in months, if not years, that he is back home, and then this! How very considerate. (Also a good catch.)

The rest of it is a bit much, but making sure Faraday's at least vaguely prepared for her new responsibilities as the wife of a powerful nobleman seems like a pretty good idea to me! Yeah it's frustrating that she wants to talk to people and can't right now, but again, she's about to marry the heir to the damn throne, she needs to suck it up and study. And in this world, any woman born into nobility would know that.

And would she not want to be as well-prepared for the marriage as she possibly could be, too?

See, Faraday, now you're thinking a bit more like someone in your position should. And I like that she has realised that Bourneheld was trying! Such a pity the potential for a good marriage and even the chance of helping feuding brothers find peace is going to get completely skipped over for 'passionate' (hah) 'romance' (HAH!).

Indeed. And I like that she is willing to give Borneheld an actual chance, too. Too bad that we are probably supposed to see her as "naïve" for this.

...Which makes me worry, because in series like this, characters who I like tend to either be suddenly villains or murdered to give the lead angst.

Oh, that will not happen to Embeth. I do hate her eventual fate, but we will not learn about it in the first trilogy.

Honestly I think I would've preferred if it was more 'I didn't love him romantically, but I cared for him regardless and his death hurt me more than I can say'. I mean don't get me wrong, arranged marriages leading slowly into genuine romantic love are great, but every now and then I'd like to see ones that don't end in romantic love but are happy and strong regardless.

(nods) It would help with this series's amatonormativity, at least.

I have the feeling there's not going to be much kindness in these books and I should cling onto every good moment while I can.

I have that feeling, too. At least the later series and books will be kinder...

[wolfgoddess77]

- Axis tells Timozel that he can come too. Timozel is glad with that, but he is “resentful that he need[s] Axis’ permission to sleep in his own house”, especially when Axis will probably use it to further his affair with Embeth.

Why should he need Axis's permission if it's his own home? Also, where does Axis get off inviting a person into someone else's home? That's just rude. It doesn't make me think any better of Axis, if that's what you were going for, author. I still hate him.

- We are now informed that Embeth has another son and daughter, “twins and a year younger than Timozel”, who are both still at Carlon. Why we are told this now, I have no idea.

All I can figure is that there were portraits of the other children that might have drawn inquiries, but if that was it, it would be nice to actually see it mentioned. Otherwise, it's just a pointless addition.

- She knows she was “bedazzled” by her first look at Axis,

Oh, gag.

- He is the richest man in the realm aside from Priam, and he is the WarLord and heir to the throne. “She could do no better”.

Wait a second. Maybe I overlooked this, but does that mean Faraday is essentially going to be the future queen? I doubt it'll happen, since we're clearly supposed to be shipping Faraday and Axis, but still.

- Embeth rises and stretches her hand out toward Embeth.

I think that second 'Embeth' is supposed to be 'Faraday'.

- “Her eyes fill[] with mortified tears” and she whispers an apology. She flees before she begins to cry.

Uhh, why? I get the apology, as walking in on a private moment can be horrifying, but why is she about to cry? Don't tell me that she's already in love with Axis.

- Axis makes to go after her, but Embeth tells him to wait there, as she will talk to Faraday.

Seeing as how no mention is made of him pausing to put on clothes first, I'm going to imagine him streaking through the castle and traumatizing all the servants.

- Faraday first wants to ask a question about what just happened, and that is if “women at court take lovers, even though they are married to another”.

OH, I WONDER WHY SHE MIGHT BE ASKING THIS QUESTION. SHE SURELY COULDN'T BE THINKING OF HAVING AN AFFAIR WITH AXIS ONCE SHE'S MARRIED TO BORNEHELD, EVEN THOUGH THE TWO OF THEM ARE SWORN ENEMIES.

(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ You know, if this series held to true medieval law, this would be more than enough to warrant her execution, and Axis's, too.

- And I also predict that this might lead Faraday to choose Axis over Borneheld, because she likes Axis romantically, even though he has been nothing but awful to her.

And I'm sure they'll end up living happily ever after, despite all evidence to the contrary.

- And where do those boars live, then, if all the forests are gone?

Maybe they've adapted to be like warthogs, and live in burrows on the plains rather than in forests.

- Embeth tucks Faraday in, and tells her to sleep, as they need to leave soon.

Okay, this is actually a sweet little moment. It gives off a very 'loving older sister' vibe.

[pangolin20]

Why should he need Axis's permission if it's his own home? Also, where does Axis get off inviting a person into someone else's home? That's just rude. It doesn't make me think any better of Axis, if that's what you were going for, author. I still hate him.

NRSG: Indeed!

All I can figure is that there were portraits of the other children that might have drawn inquiries, but if that was it, it would be nice to actually see it mentioned. Otherwise, it's just a pointless addition.

That might have been a nice lead-in... but given that I do not remember these people ever becoming relevant, it is indeed very pointless.

Wait a second. Maybe I overlooked this, but does that mean Faraday is essentially going to be the future queen? I doubt it'll happen, since we're clearly supposed to be shipping Faraday and Axis, but still.

Oh, she will indeed! I think it will mostly be so Faraday can suffer because of being married to Borneheld, though.

I think that second 'Embeth' is supposed to be 'Faraday'.

That it is! And fixed!

Uhh, why? I get the apology, as walking in on a private moment can be horrifying, but why is she about to cry? Don't tell me that she's already in love with Axis.

Oh, she is a bit, but I am quite certain she is just feeling very bad about intruding here, because Douglass needs to rub it in.

You know, if this series held to true medieval law, this would be more than enough to warrant her execution, and Axis's, too.

But in this series, it is certainly a death sentence for Borneheld... (Also, I have never seen "flipping a table" depicted like this before! I like it :>)

And I'm sure they'll end up living happily ever after, despite all evidence to the contrary.

They actually will not!

Maybe they've adapted to be like warthogs, and live in burrows on the plains rather than in forests.

That could certainly be true.

Okay, this is actually a sweet little moment. It gives off a very 'loving older sister' vibe.

I like it too. It would be so nice to see more of Embeth and Faraday together.

[wolfgoddess77]

(Also, I have never seen "flipping a table" depicted like this before! I like it :>)

There are a bunch of different variations. Just search for something like 'table-flipping emote', and you should be able to find a ton of them.